TITLE? Although GRAMMAR people kill animals for wearingGRAMMAR their fur, this is an important problem in our society. In history, when the humans were cavemenVOCAB , the humans needed of the animals for the clothes. But now, in the modern world, some people think that the animal´s GR furs are an incredible fashion vestment; the others think that don’t need to kill animalsGR and I agree with this idea.
First of all, the animals live. If we kill life, we are a murdererGR. Moreover, there are technology advances and people don’t have the need to kill an animal for GR design clotheGR. Now, the humans have different ways, there are new discoveries. Opponents of this idea, they GR think that animal´s GR furs are a great type of fashion. Firstly, the animals aren’t important in the world, the human is the leader in the world so we can kill animals. Secondly, the animal´s furs in the clothes are beautiful, it is necessary for the fashion. PUNCT However, in my opinion there are exceptions: We can use the fur of an animal if it was dead. The humanGR have discovered new materials which replace animal fur. CONCLUSION
Although GRAMMAR people kill animals for wearingGRAMMAR their fur, this is an important problem in our society. In history, when the humans were cavemenVOCAB , the humans needed of the animals for the clothes. But now, in the modern world, some people think that the animal´s GR furs are an incredible fashion vestment; the others think that don’t need to kill animalsGR and I agree with this idea.
First of all, the animals live. If we kill life, we are a murdererGR. Moreover, there are technology advances and people don’t have the need to kill an animal for GR design clotheGR. Now, the humans have different ways, there are new discoveries.
Opponents of this idea, they GR think that animal´s GR furs are a great type of fashion. Firstly, the animals aren’t important in the world, the human is the leader in the world so we can kill animals. Secondly, the animal´s furs in the clothes are beautiful, it is necessary for the fashion.
PUNCT However, in my opinion there are exceptions: We can use the fur of an animal if it was dead. The humanGR have discovered new materials which replace animal fur.
CONCLUSION